Every year several languages die out.Some people think that this is not
important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To
what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Someone said that:”Life will die without languages” but some people think that this
is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the
world.Personally,I strongly disagree with this opinion because of the fact
that:crucial of languages and perks of its.
First of all,having languages is very crucial due to popularity.Nowadays,the world is
promoted and languages are developed as well.It is purely limited vision if they do
not have languages since they may find it hard to contact with other people.For
instance,English is well-known by many people and a large of people in the world
are using English.Hence,If you know about English,you can stand a chance of
traveling over the world without challenging.According to the report,the people
knowing second language increase higher than previous year.It is proved that the
social is not developing without languages
Moreover,a considerable number of people thought :”the more languages you
know,the more opportunities you have”.Firstly,Knowing more languages you have
opportunities of joining in a foreign companies. Foreign companies always require
for people who know about second languages and they ready to bring well-paid job
for employees.For example,foreign companies pay 100VNĐ per hour yet domestic
companies pay 40VNĐ per hour.From then,people can see that languages bring
them many chances.Even students tend to study abroad in order to acquire
numerous knowledge and have a good salary in the future.Besides that,knowing
languages make people confident when they come into contact with people coming
from different countries.Maybe so parents often let children join in national summer
camp so as to connect with foreign friends and train their reading skills.
In conclusion,I really protest about this opinion.Languages is very important and
people need to improve more language in order to promote themselves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89160839161 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.71030426894 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 273.725569686 49.4020404114 554% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 421.25 106.682146367 395% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.5 20.7667163134 344% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.25 7.06120827912 513% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343124416376 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237865380971 0.084324248473 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130952600536 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972294066627 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855549187227 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.1 13.0946893788 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.07 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.19 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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