creativity is important to success, agree or not?
Gone was the day an employee who obeys rules and discipline, carries out exactly what his boss
commands is highly appreciated. Never ever before are ideas and initiatives, instead of similar
thought path, highly expected and evaluated. In the current digital era, creativity has become an
invaluable asset, profoundly contributing to a person’s outstanding success in both academic and
work life.
First of all, in today’s harsh competition for opportunities and success, creativity is essential to
make a person distinguished from others. With no doubt, almost all people are educated from a
same educational system, with the same materials, teachers, and exams, getting the same
qualifications, then naturally following the same procedure, graduating and scouring for a job. But
there are certainly not enough dominated universities or jobs with high salaries for everyone. In
the ocean of excellent students and skilled workers, the ones who are different with adventurous
ideas and daring initiatives will be chosen the business environment also bears the same
competition. While all companies have similar products, with the same price, the one with creative
marketing and consumer-stimulating strategies will make more profits. In the race for survival and
good places, creativity creates chances and success.
Secondly, by adopting a creative outlook and thinking “out-of-the-box”, we can open ourselves up
to new possibilities and change. As one writer said: we are creatures of habit, tying ourselves
to a routine belief system, locking our thinking into the way things are, preventing ourselves from
exploring for ideas in usual outside places. If everyone dared not wish a crazy, foolish, impractical
dream as Orville and Wilbur Wright, may humans have not invented planes to fly? Had Bill Gates
not dared to quit college, following his own path without changing his mind, the world wouldn’t
have seen such dramatic booming of the technological era. They succeeded because they have thought
something different. Creativity is not something abstract. It simply already exists when a student
manages to find the most effective way suited him for studying, outside the traditional ones, or
when a company gains big success via a unique campaign advertising for their brand name that
none of their rivals could come up with.
Generally, creativity is crucial for any distinguished success. It paves the path for humans to break
down every barrier, reach out all humans’ limits, for every single one of us to pioneer in initiatives
that can profoundly change our lives, in a better way.
- Young people enjoy their life more than older people? do you agree or disagree? 70
- some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed, other people believe that zoos serve useful functions,which view point do you support? 70
- in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today. 60
- argument if the dinosaurs is endotherm or not. 73
- Do you agree or disagree that you should be creative to be successful? 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57493857494 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18787334246 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641277641278 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5490671591 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.055555556 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.53405017921 618% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13291288967 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594090551499 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804297268254 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383398072459 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664037748858 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.