Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is more important than others?
Most of perople use economic growth as a measurement for a country's success. Yet, other people belive that, apart of economical growth, there are several other factors that could be use to measure a nation's success. Above all, i think education is the most important factor.
To asses a country's success value, we can use education, health and individual human rights. Healthcare service is crucial factor as it affects the life expectancy of a civilization in a country. Too, individual human rights play a pivotal role in the counrty's life as it directly modifies the happiness of a country's citizens. Finally, compared to the other factors, education is the most crucial factor for national development as it influences the quality of future workers, teachers, and governments.
Moreover, from my point of view, education is also the most fundamental indicator of country's level of growth because it has great impact of the other two factors i told before. It affects economy in the context of worker arsenal's of a company that the more well educated workforce in a company, the higher quality of a company's output. It also affects human's health in the essence that doctors need to be educated to solve medical problems.
In a nutshell, the current trend in measuring a country's success is by uding economy as the most valuable factor. Yet, i certainly believe that education system has the highest value, comparing to other factors such as economy, health and human rights in deciding a nation's success
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Healthcare service is crucial factor
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