Title: you missed an appointment for an immigration interview recently because of circumstances out of your control.
Write to the immigration office. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Apologize for missing your appointment
Explain what happened
Request a new appointment
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding to an appointment of immigration interview at your office on last Friday. For introduction, my full name is Duong Viet Linh and I am applying a student visa for studying Postgraduate course in America.
First of all, I would like to deeply apologize for missing the immigration interview due to an unexpected issue. When I was on the way to the immigration office, unfortunately my car was hit by another car from behind. Although it did not cause any injuries for myself, my car was severely damaged and was not able to continue the journey. Consequently, I could not attend the appointment as scheduled. I have enclosed the police record of the accident with this letter for your reference.
As my course will be started very soon in next month, I am wondering if I can book a new appointment as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hear from you soon and your assistances in this matter are much appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Viet Linh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... soon as possible. I am looking forward to hear from you soon and your assistances in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, regarding, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77586206897 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98275862069 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5131119357 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30384476512 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113622890741 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758479772175 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1855186524 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750464761021 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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