In many schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects and boys choose science subjects
What do you think are the reasons?
Do you think that this tendency should be changed?
Among these various options for subjects which students eager to learn women commonly enroll in arts classes while men interest in courses about science. This essay will firstly discuss how specific characteristics are affected by different gender; secondly address students should be able to follow their subjects.
Gender differences are the dominant factors that have an intense effect on this phenomenon. Firstly, girls are attracted by arts due to their appreciation about the aesthetic qualities of works of arts. Furthermore, arts require accomplishment and scrupulousness, which women perform better than men. In contrast, boys are generally regarded as more logical, which give them a better grasp of analytical subjects including mathematics or physics. To illustration, many surveys show that female get a higher score in arts while the opposite sex performs a good grip on science.
In my view, this tendency needs immediate alteration due to decreasing sexual discrimination. Moreover, it is crucial for students to be at liberty to pursue what subjects they desire to learn without attached by any labels for their gender identity, then easily to become a high-flyer in their future career. We can see this when lots of female scientists gain many achievements by their dedication to discover the mystery elements, while hundreds of cinematographic masterpieces by successful actors are awarded Oscar.
Taking everything into consideration, natural preferences of each gender take an essential role in people’s choice, and it is vital to shift this trend so that all students are free to study which courses they aspire.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, in contrast, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5256916996 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03928667779 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683794466403 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3782040064 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110370971688 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413030586693 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0136479282565 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615810589393 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272901916091 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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