Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Majority of people are reading news online, though newspapers secure cardinal part in news. I think that newspaper is playing vital role as compare to e-news. Before reaching to a conclusion both these statements will examined.
On one side of the coin, every area of today's society influenced by technological advancement. Since innovation of internet providing a platform where people may search anything, people are reading news online. Furtheremore, what makes internet famous for reading news, is that it is time and money saving option. For example, in the U.S.A majority of people disdain papernews because they do not have sufficient time to buy it, for that they have been using internet to read news. Hence, it can be said that reading news on internet is convenient.
Despite using of internet, more people are using newspaper. As newspaper is stunning option for those who do not know how to use internet, newspaper is one and only option to read news. Another most prominent point is that, in some areas it is still difficult to use internet due to availability of network. To illustrate, in India especially in majority of rural areas still availability of internet media is not there, therefore, people are depend on newspapers.
Lastly, had internet not been invented, the usage of newspaper why would have been much above.
From all the points elaborated above it can be concluded that where internet platform is proscribe and network issues are there, over there people do not have any alternate for reading news except newspaper. I strongly believe that newspaper is stellar option for news due to it's reliability.
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.Do you agree or disagree?Provide relevant examples if necessary. 61
- Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views 73
- One long distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years time but they cause the same amount of pollution so some people think that we should discourage non essential flights such as tourist travel rather than to limit the use of cars to w 73
- Some people think that sucess is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.What is your opinion? 67
- Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and what is wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opin 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...laying vital role as compare to e-news. Before reaching to a conclusion both these sta...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'examine'
Suggestion: examine
...a conclusion both these statements will examined. On one side of the coin, every area...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... saving option. For example, in the U.S.A majority of people disdain papernews be...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, may, so, still, therefore, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11895910781 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71375973926 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557620817844 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7540045749 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346245751077 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124683596677 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677489680994 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187472509428 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712040896553 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.