As we are exploring the contemporary culture, in my opinion, the culture at present is an outcome by multiple cases including the trends of its youth. If we want to understand the culture presently in a most effextive way, we should consider all the cases coherently. On the other hand, the culture varies in different styles, so this comprehensive essay should be disscussed separately.
To begin with, we should know what is going on at cultures presently. Due to the development of human society, the cultures also evovles simultaneously. While most of them could not develop out of their areas. Such as traditional literary culture, it was just like what it was as we discovered them in the beginning, with new definition of the traditional literary, it is also consituted with several facts same as before. On the other hand, with the more and more communications from aborads, the people abroad feel like them better, in China, there are some famous foreign singers who sing Chinese songs populated all over the country, in this point, the young people do have the ability to represent the contemorary culture.
What's more, the young people welcome new affairs faster than other people so this offer chances for them to gain information effectively and quickly. By this mean, the young people could be on behalf of the contemporary culture. For example, when it firstly introduced to China, the drones which could records videos when they are flying are not very acceptable by most of people , some aruged it was used in the war instead of the daily life. While the young people, with brave heart and curiousity were evoked the intesets by this flying machine, Then a group of young people started the company named DJI, one of the biggest drone companies in the world. Evidently, the young people have the ablity to play the key role in the contemporary culture, because most of them are brave and curious with educated brain simultaneously.
On the other hand, however, as there are other contemporary cultures like the art and music especially the classic one, could not be analyzed by the trend of youth. When it goes to the Classic music, I believe the Betoveens and Chopins are the most powerful figures which we can analyzed at present. Given there are so many classical music masters while they can not on behalf of the contemporary culture. For instance, if people recall the symphony, most of the people would say the name like Bach the music like the Ode joy.
In conclusion, the trends of the young people could be analyzed for the contemporary culture research, while there are some fields which related to the traditional ones could not be analayzed merely by the young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'record'
Suggestion: record
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
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Suggestion: analyze
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2250.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90196078431 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63856451206 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0562408186 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146671333936 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535194141218 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033870455221 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09490657311 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263989233687 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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