Some people believe that research into family history is useful for the next generation while other claim that present and future are more important. Discuss both view and give opinion
Indeed,a group of people think, taking a closer look to their back ground for knowing about parents, that is necessary for upcoming year , however , others contradict, he should focus on their present condition and just work for it. Truly, I firmly agree with others because there is no benefits of family history, despite it, they may do hard work for better future because it can be controllable.
To start with, investigation related to their forefather is play a crucial role for his fame. Additionally, by knowing the parenting history, he may came to know about his connection with them and also his birth place. Moreover, he get his own identity, with the help of that he get the higher self-esteem which indirectly helps him in his near by future. As an example , an orphan child,after being successful, he want to know deep about his ancestor family so he get happiness by having the past history.
On the other side, despite of focusing in past,they should concentrate towards their work and their new footprint because present have the greatest importance. To add, every people can transform their future by their own self and having an ambition and determination is play a vital role. Jack Ma,he is the suitable example of it, he came from the poverty and get the success with his hard work. Therefore, he gave back to his society and got international fame.
To sum up, by having the well knowledge regarding the past, one can get his identity and happiness but if, he come from criminal family then he may be mislead from his future goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8171641791 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61042922971 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3049917914 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.363636364 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820618297131 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358286835484 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036936246796 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061366886882 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468920197934 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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