The chat below gives the information about growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future.
The given bar graph escalates the in information about risk in cities' population in some parts of globe from 1950 and 2000 and also includes the prediction of 2030
Overall, it is clear that the population in all parts of the world followed a similar trend. It is predicted to be inclined in later 30 years. .
To Commerce with, in case of global population, the proportion of population was only 30% in initial year ;however, after five decades it experienced a dramatic soar and reached at under a fifth. Predictions depict that figure for worldwide population would grow significantly and got three thirds.
Moving further, in respect of Asia and Africa , fraction of population accounted for a tenth and 12% during 1950. Africa population soared steadily since 2000, according to estimates it would inclined by a fifth in later 20 years. The population in Asia witnessed a rapid rise and after 3 decades it is projected to be about three fifths. The most striking feature of the graph is that Latin America had more inhabitants over given period which was 40% and 70% in 1950 and 2000 respectively. In following 3 decades the figure for population would 10%more than earlier years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93532338308 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75695762678 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3004486482 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184831994319 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725840820631 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766474810584 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133867370726 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655509050028 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.