The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. To what extent do you agree?
The technological advancement has been having a major impact on the labour market during the past decade. It used to be a common practice among people to have a singular career during their whole lives. However, the current situation demands flexibility and adaptation from a prospective employee, hence, a lifelong learning would be needed to ensure the employment.
Whereas innovations enhance people’s lives in many ways, they inevitably make competition for jobs tougher. More and more duties that used to be done by humans are now performed by robots and computers, and this tendency will be developing further. Therefore, it is indispensable to have several qualifications and different abilities to be financially secure. For example, a labour worker of an automobile factory was a popular profession in the beginning of the twentieth century. But this job had been gradually undertaken by newly invented industrial robots in later years leaving many employees unemployed as they failed to adapt to the new situation.
To stay competitive on the job market and keep up with the fast technological development the continuing education has to become a new trend. Obtaining new skills and knowledge in various fields facilitates employability of a person. Combination of competence in MS Office computer programs in addition to main duties has already become a common demand by companies for their workers. Moreover, professionals would have to take up further trainings to update their knowledge and practical skills as computers, machinery and equipment are being upgraded in the course of time. Surgeons, for instance, more often operate with up-to-date laser scalpels rather than old-fashioned scalpels, and this method requires different expertise.
Given that the technological modernization and inventions will likely proceed altering situation on job markets, such steps as acquiring and improving skills in different areas can be taken by working people to assure a profound career in the future.
- Some people that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.Disc 84
- Your company changed to a new uniform While you like it there is still something that could be improved about it Write to your company manager and say Why do you like the new uniform What could be improved about it Suggest a way how it can be done 94
- Walking is known to be beneficial for health yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days What are the reasons for this What can be done to address this problem 78
- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? 84
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51612903226 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11058078165 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3943208172 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220988343293 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671479408647 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489483642461 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121224542848 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122312070525 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.