Recent advancement in technology have made the tv screen so live that people do not feel to go for any live performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At presently, there are thousands of gadgets available which have more benefits for human life. Although, a group of inhabitants believe that every person can watch colourful screen lively because of technically advancement. However, I moderately disagree with the current phenomenon because, only by sitting in front of television, no one can get the live feelings Instead of that they should just join any live concert.
To begin with, by participating in host shows, it has more benefits. First and foremost, participants may get feeling of togetherness and also it entertain themselves. Moreover, it is scientifically proven that, by taking in public event, it not only plummet down the heartbeat level but also reduce the mental stress or pain. Additionally, it boost up their thinking power and gives the positivity. As an example, the international cricket tournament, where many people people are participating for seeing the live match by their own eye. In result, he get personal experience. To add more, cricket stadium, it is the place, where most of dwellers are meeting each other which indirectly increase their social connection.
On the other hand, technology make the television extremely live so every family member sit and watch. Moreover, it is very cheap so everyone can afford it so that it make the convenient. However, sometimes, the place of show is far away so a few can join it. At the time, television helps a lot ,it send live show in a 2-3 seconds duration. For instance, "the rising star" program, which is uploaded live so that oversea people can watch it and get fun.
To sum up, alive concerts help us to connected socially and also gives the positive mindset regardless of television program.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88834808017 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7410776018 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189221344493 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053475701367 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523968608438 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997246134958 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725615795274 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.