Some people find history a fascinating subject. Others say it is dull and has no place in modern life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
History is often considered as a social science, an art, or a past event that offers a lot of extreme interested ideas which are worth to elaborate by a community while others argue history is not a part of globalization era since it has lack of merits and dullness. However, the present and the future exist owing to the phenomena in the years of yore.
A group of people convey that an art or an object from the past is boring and antiquated. A plenty of art objects such as sculptures that are made in a few centuries ago are might suppose unattractive because they are unpopular and no longer useful in modern life. For example, an opinion survey of Romanesque sculptures by people in Indonesia and Thailand in 2012 conducted by a professor from Faculty of History, University of Cambridge revealed that 40% of Indonesian and Thai do not like these arts since the arts are unfamiliar and others prefer to neglect them as not correlate with their day-to-day activities. Thus, such historic objects might become disappear.
In contrast, some people are of the opinion that history is interested since it contributes significantly in people’s life. By learning history, people could shunt from same mistakes in the past and as a source to increase the quality of life. For example, when people learned about World War I as well as II, they had realized that not only does War kill many people but also hinder the development in many countries such as education or economy. Hence, people might get new insight and have a better life.
Ultimately, history may make bored and no acceptable in this modernization because some objects in the past are not picturesque. Nonetheless, history could educate society through historic glances that affect deeply in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y could educate society through historic glances that affect deeply in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76718067514 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7267542188 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195351910035 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740700423823 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611779160428 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116881441655 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459294700416 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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