Some say that for any country hosting an international sports events such as the Olymoic games is costly, inefficient and is a waste of money, while others disagree.discuss bothe views and give your opinion.

Games are most fascinate events which organized by international games like olympic games. Ergo, some masses deem that it has good effect but others believe it is just wild goose chase of money. This essay shall look into both argument I, however, side with.

To begin with, olympic games has positive impact on all individuals like it is good source of gain knowledge and improve or create new contact with other nations. It helps to individuals for travel of other countries. For instance, if any person play these games that time he/she have good opportunity for make new friends and link with other country because that time many players come from different countries. As a result, it has positive impact because it helps to gain all person's knowledge about many nations or make new relations with them.

In the latter view, one coin has two sides, In this way, it is just wastage of money. When start olympic games the same time where this games are intiated there's sports minister responsibility to supply available food or safety which have in huge amount so, that time many money is consumed. But when government that money put on their country. Hence, their country is more developed and can reduce poverty. To quote, in India was commonwealth games in Delhi 2010 then many money was consumed on it. If official authorities want money take on welfare society. In this case, poor people take on house or right amount of food.

In epilogue, according to me, every silver cloud has dark lining also. In this way, it has many merits as well as demerits. Hence, government should consume money in limit on these games.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...erson play these games that time he/she have good opportunity for make new friends a...
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Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ive impact because it helps to gain all persons knowledge about many nations or make ne...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...same time where this games are intiated theres sports minister responsibility to suppl...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...which have in huge amount so, that time many money is consumed. But when government ...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...which have in huge amount so, that time many money is consumed. But when government that m...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...s commonwealth games in Delhi 2010 then many money was consumed on it. If official a...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...s commonwealth games in Delhi 2010 then many money was consumed on it. If official authori...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...010 then many money was consumed on it. If official authorities want money take on...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... me, every silver cloud has dark lining also. In this way, it has many merits as wel...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...very silver cloud has dark lining also. In this way, it has many merits as well as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83571428571 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32005453842 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2063758364 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171238562379 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501888695048 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388944626831 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946189112957 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474978400591 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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