the diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information feedback to earlier stages to enable adjustment
The diagram depicts the processes of goods production. Overall, there are two kinds of processes i.e flow of manufacturing and flow of information which is supporting each other before the goods are marketed and there is a feedback from information flow in several manufacturing flows.
First, there are eight stages of production of consumer goods from storage to sales. The first stage is taking the raw materials and manufactured components on storage and at the same time, product research have to be designed in other process. After that, materials and components on storage and product research designed will be input to production planning. The next steps are assembly, inspection, testing, despatch and sales.
Several processes will be given information feedback such as testing, packaging and sales. On testing process, it has to design again before taking to packaging. On packaging phase, it will be researched the market and carried out the advertising. Furthermore, on the last stage (sales), there are two kinds of continuous feedbacks id. est production planning continued on storage and market research proceeded on advertising and design.
- Sports programmes are very popular on television nowadays Some people argue that these programmes are the reason for the poor health of many young people as they prefer to watch sports rather than partake in them To what extent do you agree or disagree wi 72
- the diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information feedback to earlier stages to enable adjustment 73
- Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion. 84
- Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion. 78
- Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'feedbacks'' or 'feedback's'?
Suggestion: feedbacks'; feedback's
...ales, there are two kinds of continuous feedbacks id. est production planning continued o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43888888889 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92820996178 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.891578652 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195135930851 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082287912934 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728708045898 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137796992097 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416999226444 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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