Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Seema Sharma, part time employee of your company and I am writing in regard to your letter
which asked me to become a full time employee of your company.
Firstly, I am glad that you considered me amongst other employees for this post. However, I wish to
inform you that I will be unable to provide my service to the company as a full time employee because
of my study commitments. As I had initially informed you about my pursuance of an MBA degree which
requires a great deal of hard work and time which will be impossible if I join the company as full time.
Being in a part time job, it gives me sufficient time to study with simultaneously fulfilling my financial
needs as well.
I apologize to decline this exciting offer and hope to offer my services as part time employee only.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Seema Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Seema Sharma, part time employee of your company and I am writi...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...your letter which asked me to become a full time employee of your company. Firstly, I...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... provide my service to the company as a full time employee because of my study commitmen...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... be impossible if I join the company as full time. Being in a part time job, it gives me...
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Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...n the company as full time. Being in a part time job, it gives me sufficient time to stu...
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Line 13, column 77, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... offer and hope to offer my services as part time employee only. Looking forward to hear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, well, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68553459119 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61792405613 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3241141207 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299187599686 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123605452695 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601797513349 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127703922233 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634971315787 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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