Dear Mr. Mukesh,
I am writing to enquire about a job opportunity at one of your restaurants. I would like to remind you that we met on 20th of last month during our flight travel from Delhi to Mumbai. In our conversation, you suggested me to contact in case I am interested to work at one of them.
I have gained a Masters degree in Management but currently working as a "Sales Executive" at a retail store in Delhi. However, I am currently looking for an opportunity where I can to utilize my management skills. Therefore, I am interested to take up a Manager role at any of your restaurants as I have relevant knowledge and interest. Moreover, with my previous experience I would definitely be able to manage clients and provide efficient service.
I would request you to consider my request and let if there is any suitable opportunity for me. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Prasad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in Management but currently working as a 'Sales Executive' at a retail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, therefore, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79518072289 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05578486877 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2192521052 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150808280212 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704954400677 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628212221549 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118413691815 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823693937092 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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