In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic, why?. What are the advantages and disadvantages of cashless society.
Nowadays, usage of electronic medium to replace cash is a topic of debate, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn attention from the public. It can be said that cashless society is inevitable and could have the potential to solve many problems such as increase in economical condition of a country, improve transactions and reduce inappropriate usage of wealth. However, some people hold the view that electronic transactions should not be trusted due to their underlying security concerns. This essay will discuss both merits and demerits of a cashless society and thus will lead to a logical conclusions.
At the outset, there are several advantages of utilising credit card and electronic mediums, and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that the ability to perform transfers in rapid manner. As an illustration, a study conducted by VISA, MasterCard and EURO card shows that one can buy products and pays bills in milliseconds, which is a significant reduction in time to its cash counterparts. Furthermore, cashless transactions is a easy way to track individual budgets through online reports and statements those can be even accessed from mobile devices. Thus, cashless society offer more advantages to their citizens.
Nevertheless, there exists some drawbacks, which can certainly overshadow the potential influence of cashless country, and the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that the security concerns and fraud comes with it. Contrary to the cash usage, electronic transactions are prone to payment fraud and identity theft. According to one research, almost eighty percentage people who have online banking account were compromised and lost money to adversaries at one stage. Therefore, many people are skeptical about to embracing electronic medium even today.
In the light of discussions above,it can be concluded that the impact of electronic medium in our live is prominent, although the security of identities of citizens and potential payment frauds should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 315.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45714285714 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9849813029 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.23116574 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.230769231 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136525704771 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565778893477 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710738941373 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784038380171 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529032633884 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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