- Men do must of the high level job should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to reserved for woman ?
Throughout democracy existence, women and men are equal in society. This equality should common all the part of society. Especially, business life need this equality because it keep mirror direct to equality degree of between men and women in society very well. Generally, the companies want to men for high quality position such as CEO. However, this status should change. Governments shouldencourage companies and business world about reserving women to high level jobs. This situation help to company about both more communicating with largely partof society and more benfiting from women’ complicated brain.
To start with, the researches show that women brain make more emphaty than men brain and women have better capability of communicating. In addition, emphaty and capability of communicating are more important for companies about their extending to major part of society. For example, technology companies need emphaty to develop their technological devices which are for disable people about living emotion of disable people. Because of this, the women who developed emotion and emphaty skills should have right of working high level job.
Secondly, women can decide correctly on very stressful job because their brain is scheduled multidirectional. And also, they can consider more detailed among many factor rather than men brain. In result of this, they can work in companies which have high level jobs position that need high brain capability.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that, thwe women in society are encouraged by governments to work in company which has being reserved high quality job by government. In other side, governments and companies should negotiation together about this. Hopefully, women will work high level job and they will contribute to society. Thus, society will benefit from women brain very well.
- The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. 73
- -Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree ? 67
- - Men do must of the high level job should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to reserved for woman ? 73
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause ? What solution can you suggest ? 78
- Each year, the crime rate increases.What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? 56
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...opefully, women will work high level job and they will contribute to society. Thu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48630136986 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71993493832 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6837372439 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217099589643 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080834318014 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618018097978 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147777157693 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300118928982 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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