You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains.
You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up.
Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Respected Sir,
I am writing this letter with a mixed feeling of excitement and worries at the same time. First of all, I would like to appreciate the whole plan as I was waiting for such plan which covers both health and adventure perspectives. I am fond of hiking and traveling through mountains and this tour seems best to satisfy my cravings of mountain expedition.I had been a frequent hiker in the past, owing to my health conditions I have not taken a part in any such activity for a long time..
Considering the duration of the plan, I must have to make certain arrangements at my end. Just to make sure that I do not miss this opportunity, I would like you to inform me about dates of this venture. In addition to this, please share the cost of this whole endeavor so that I can manage my financial ends.
In the end, I would like to share my point of concern here. Owing to obesity, I have breathing issues and cannot manage to walk continuously. Doctors however encourage me to walk as much as I can with regular intervals in order to build my stamina.
Your apt response in this regard will help me in taking decision accordingly. Hope to get a positive reply soon.
Yours truly,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...isfy my cravings of mountain expedition.I had been a frequent hiker in the past, ...
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Line 2, column 485, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...art in any such activity for a long time.. Considering the duration of the plan,...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48636363636 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60566372947 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5158794498 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714643227284 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023759671979 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232714316849 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0369409502981 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112407890429 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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