Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Railroads have become increasingly popular these days due to its agility and less traffic congestion. governments has to explore railways for mass transit to curb pollution and traffic menace when compared with conventional transport by roads. this essay will discuss, to what extend I agree or disagree with this statement.
transportation by road is being used since ages as it is convenient to commuters, as they can reach their exact destination without interchange. However, due to increased number of vehicles the commuting time has increased significantly over a period. governments are in constant search for alternatives to curb this issue. By building an effective rail network which runs along the road. governments can win the hearts of the people as it saves their precious time. I completely agree with the statement.
Modern world is plagued with pollution, which is a bigger evil to mankind's survival. By building a well planned railway network, authorities can cut the carbon footprint on the planet. which would have very little impact on the health of their citizens when compared to the pollution caused by each vehicle. Research shows that air pollution with PM 2.5 particles > 200 particles per m3 is leading cause of death which reduces life expectancy significantly by choking lungs. So I agree with the statement to full extent.
To conclude, although investing in railways is an expensive affair, it is worth doing by effective planning of the network, it would be convenient, it saves public time, money, health and environment. I strongly agree with the given statement. Every government should explore viable option for building an effective rail network.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32462686567 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90545596811 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5234495122 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9411764706 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64705882353 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257496812025 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899465970662 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980779596571 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153468241024 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595494531026 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.