You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain the important event
Apologize for the sitaution
Suggest a new arrangement
Dear Riya,
Hope you are doing good. I am very much excited to visit your home in England. It would be so much fun. But I feel sad to inform you that I can't visit during the time that we planned earlier.
I am sorry that I had to cancel my visit in the last moment. Actually, my cousin brother's engagement is fixed in the same month that I was planning to visit England. Although, the event is just for a single day, my cousin needs my help in planning the venue and catering services for that day. Also, many of my distant relatives are going to visit the engagement ceremony and after the event they are going to stay at my place as they want to move around the city. They are visiting my place almost after a year, and are really excited about all the shopping and tour of the different places around the city.
As attending my cousin's engagement function is really important to me, I was thinking to postpone my visit for the next month. I hope it is not an issue for you. I have great plans for both of us when I make my visit to England.
I eagerly wait for your reply.
Yours truly,
Khyati
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...un. But I feel sad to inform you that I cant visit during the time that we planned e...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of us when I make my visit to England. I eagerly wait for your reply. Yours...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...land. I eagerly wait for your reply. Yours truly, Khyati
^^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or your reply. Yours truly, Khyati
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27830188679 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14912203588 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4475005256 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221572216811 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911828543709 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051469218946 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149327388929 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418143403047 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.