I most definitely support the project of students making houses for homeless people. I prefer this project for the practical skills that they would gain through this experience, more fun time with friends as well as the visual consequence of the attempt they make during the project.
First, I think that the skills than students are going to learn in completing this project will be really beneficial for them. they will learn about woodcraft, get familiar with the basic structure and materials needed for making a house besides even if interested enough they can find a part-time job with the experience they’ve gained there. They will even be able to use this skill in their personal lives too. Like making a fence or a simple table.
Furthermore, unlike the other suggested projects this way students get to spend some fun time with their friends. The research has shown that doing activities with friends will make people happier and more enthusiastic about continuing it despite its difficulties. Therefore, completing a project for university and simultaneously having the chance to spend fun-time with friends is going to make this project a lot more interesting.
At last, the visual consequences of a project make it feel more satisfying. It's a psychological consensus that people get to believe things more when they see it. By time passing the other projects will come to be forgotten. But a house is not going be missed and students every time that pass from the neighborhood will remember the memories, difficulties and the challenged they faced and feel satisfied of the project they completed.
In conclusion, scheme of making a house is more beneficial comparing to the other ones in so many ways. The great opportunity of learning new skills, the fun they will have despite the difficulty of their job and the satisfaction of their doings are only some of the bright aspects of this project.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03134796238 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76225537127 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520376175549 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8940027598 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138198093383 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540058268005 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262489739395 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895706790986 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110746902709 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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