Every progress and development throughout history has had always its critics and its fans. A shining example for technology is internet which it’s consequences has always been a controversy. The educational, personal and industrial evoulutionary impacts internets has had upon our lives is vivid and undispensable.
As for starting think it’s better from the time that internet wasn’t a handy technology like now.Students, teachers and scholars who are the base of development in every country before internet losing most of their times in libraries looking for the adequate source for study and research, employees looking for adept workers and brilliant minds to hire while lots of the talented and science thirsty people dieing daily without being noticed, lack of social media which for sure lots of people are nowadays making money under their shadows are just some of the advantages internet has brought to our lives.
Information is the basis for every decision and movement. Internet has enlightened our lives with the gift of knowledge about everything including political situations about both our home country and foreign ones. It is an indispensable that some time politicians try to lie to people about things but internet has made it almost impossible to hide a truth from people. Nowadays people are contributing more and more in the movements and groups that try to stop governments from making a decision or pushing them to do philanthropy projects.
On the other hand there are always people who misuse facilities and internet also can turn to a devastating weapon if being abused. Envadorment of one’s privacy and embezzlement or blackmailing them with it are some problems people struggle with it around the globe daily. Further more, internet is an addicting tool and it’s become a prevail problem between adolescents. Therefore, worries about the physically and mentally unfitness of population like obesity and depression are getting more serious. Although teenages are using their internet more and more every day for playing and being in thouch with their friends, Some even believe that the connections and friendships that people have through intenrnet are artificial,absolutely not vital and not contributing to the real life.
In conclution I may say that internet despite it’s disadvantages plays a ket role in our lives and its benefits overweights it’s disadvantages and in the end it is us that determine that if exploit it in a right construnctive way or destructive one.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Modern technology is creating a single world culture Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 95
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
- TPO-46 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and exam 66
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects to specialize in one specific subject. 95
- it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Students
...wasn't a handy technology like now.Students, teachers and scholars who are the base...
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Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aking money under their shadows are just some of the advantages internet has brou...
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Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ing money under their shadows are just some of the advantages internet has brought to our ...
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Line 2, column 574, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
...der their shadows are just some of the advantages internet has brought to our lives. Inf...
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Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith it are some problems people struggle with it around the globe daily. Further ...
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Line 4, column 345, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... an addicting tool and it's become a prevail problem between adolescents. Therefore,...
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Line 4, column 738, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , absolutely
...le have through intenrnet are artificial,absolutely not vital and not contributing to the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3675 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04305664587 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.765196409 48.9658058833 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.357142857 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197507130013 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649770558146 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469287785338 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982600090216 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492240238994 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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