The bar chart provides information about national and international level selling of varying types of digital games namely, mobile phone games, online games, console games and handheld games, during the period of 7 years.
Overall, handheld games were popularly sold throughout the period while, online games and mobile phone games arised later in market but showed upward trend whereas, console games was the only one that depicted downward trend with minor fluctuations. It is clear, that 2004 was the only year which illustrated rise in turnover of all the games listed.
Handheld games sales rate was initially in year 2000 other games around $11 billion, least sold games were console at $6 billion. In next three consecutive years sales of handheld games showed rose $13, $15 and $16 billion approximately compared to console games which declined by $5 billion to $4 billion. In 2004, both lead to significant rise around one billion dollar. In the later two years, firstly handheld games remained plunged and then peaked to $18 billion while, console games kept on declining.
Online games sales started in 2001 at minor turnover of $1 billion and rose steadily throughout the years(2002-2006) around $2 billion to $9 billion. In comparison with, mobile phone games which came later a year in market climbed from $2 billion to $7 billion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25118483412 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50216321136 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535545023697 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3067763133 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302481825973 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143043161148 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639248450677 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182709055535 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649105404615 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.