some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. in your opinion, do the drawbacks outweigh the benefits?
These days, video games come in a myriad of forms, and have always induced conflicting opinions and perceptions. Given the high prevalence of gaming, it is necessary to discuss how the merits are eclipsed by the associated risk factors.
On one end of the spectrum, video games are forms of entertainment that brings more benefits to modern society and it is possible to enhance specific cerebral functions for teenagers and adults. moreover, it can help develop detailed orientation and logical thinking process, since most knowledge in games are linked to factual truth and theories in various fields, such as history, economic, theoretical physics and so on. This, thus, greatly broaden their horizon and make learning a subconscious and absorbing process. Besides, not only the advantage of video games are of the essence for adolescents and grownups but several studies have also proclaimed that senior citizens who utilize it as a healthy exercise are also able to maintain their youth and sharpen their mind.
On the other end of the spectrum, other people including myself believe that the advantages are just the tip of the iceberg and it is outweighed by the disadvantages. for instance, video games could raise the risk of myopia from the indoor lower light intensity, as it is a sedentary activity, which limits the amount of real-world social interactions, delaying or atrophying those skills.more and more reports on how video games blurred the lines between reality and fantasy have been conducted on a large-scale. Specifically, with subjects of excessive usage, which could have detrimental repercussion rate as other forms of addiction. Furthermore, young children are particularly prone to be be susceptible to violent video games, which is the main cause of aggression and hostile behaviors accumulating over time. It is of vital importance to acknowledge and limits the negative aspects of video games since young children are exposed to all the time.
In conclusion, i am of the opinion that video games have detrimental impacts on diverse aspects, despite the positive vantage-ground. Thus, i believe it would be crucial for video games, in general, to be under explicit regulation and control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29096045198 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91770716451 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7934908163 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.076923077 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23873054092 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773469521138 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530848045269 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13866250533 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218634628953 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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