Computer techniques has become cheap and easy to acess, young adults will work from home and children will study from home. Do you think it is a positive or negative change.
This modern era of Technology and gadgets has provided ease of pursuing course and work from our convenient place. This is new growing phenomenon across the globe. Few argue that location of work and learning has a vital role in delivering the best results however few believe that saving time and energy of commute can be of great advantage to provide better output and increased dedication. In my opinion studying and working from home is new trend and has to be adopted as traditional approach will be soon or later going to loose its identity.
In today's busy and fast paced life, everyone looks for shortcut to pursue their activities, it may be in case of academics or at work. Several students are deprived of quality education, especially students of rural areas however with an inclusion of technology and internet they are able to learn new topics and subjects even at remote places, where trainers are expert from metros and tier one cities. Pursuing work from home has several advantage as it helps to save the time and cost of commute, and can work as per our convenient time and can also spend some good family time. Further it helps to concentrate more as there is no external peer pressure as in work stations. Hence in this 21st century it is considered as boon to work and study from home.
On the contrary it is believed that it has some drawback attached for instance student studying from home using gadgets will not be able to build few traits such as team work, social interaction, Character and other social behavior. Work from home is the new phenomenon, this has resulted in taking undue advantages by certain employees as they misuse it and skip their routine office work and indulge in other activities, this leads to decline in productivity. There will be extreme dependency on internet connectivity, Gadgets and other system. However there is necessary to meet the tradition need to some extent along with modern technique and method.
In conclusion, even though studying and working from home has become basic need, we should be able to develop the skill which was available in traditional approach for overall development and better outcome of our activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 529, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...approach will be soon or later going to loose its identity. In todays busy and fas...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one city', 'a city', or simply 'cities'?
Suggestion: one city; a city; cities
...rainers are expert from metros and tier one cities. Pursuing work from home has several ad...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'several advantages'.
Suggestion: several advantages
...one cities. Pursuing work from home has several advantage as it helps to save the time and cost o...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e. Further it helps to concentrate more as there is no external peer pressure as i...
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Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rnal peer pressure as in work stations. Hence in this 21st century it is considered a...
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Line 6, column 548, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...connectivity, Gadgets and other system. However there is necessary to meet the traditio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90616621984 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56213037754 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552278820375 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0258429284 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237923347021 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875678475993 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684426640421 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156664909863 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215687233191 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.