The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general well-being of all its people.
In a democratic nation, people are the most valuable asset. Every single decision taken by the statesman has to be for the ultimate well being of the people. So I do agree to the given statement.
A country’s future is molded by its citizens; they are the driving force for the all-round development of a country. Rulers put forth the ideologies and set the path of a definite future of a country, but it is the citizens who implement those ideologies at the grass root levels. Scientists develop new ideas by carrying out rigorous research, but of course conceptualization of those ideas needs huge workforce, i.e., the mass people of the nation. Similarly, artists record the ideas of past and contemporary cultures of the society through their paintings, sculptures. But again artists can not work in isolation, since they can only thrive if there are true admirers or followers of their works, and again these followers of art work are none but the people of the country.
People yield crops in the field to make the nation self-sufficient in food, runs industries through their intellectual and physical labors, performs businesses to help prosper the country in manufacturing, agriculture and businesses thereby raising the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of the country. The country becomes a growing economy only because of the talents and hard work of its people. If the people of a country are truly prosperous, then banks will survive and investment of money in banking sector keeps rolling thereby making the economy flourish. Under such circumstances, it becomes a win-win situation for both the rulers and people.
In the defense sector also, it is the people of the country, who joins the armed forces to keep the borders of our country safe and secured from foes. Defense research also requires scientists and engineers, who are none but the common citizens. If the citizens are not well-nurtured, the country can not find suitable hires for defense research and good soldiers. So the country’s sovereignty will be at stake.
It’s the people of the country who becomes athletes to represent their country in various international platforms like Olympic games, Commonwealth events etc and make the country proud. Also, when a country represents itself in international forums like UN, it’s its diplomats who provide their valuable insights to the World Order; and it is the people of a nation who becomes a future diplomat. Also in a democratic society, people choose their leaders. If the people are not well informed and properly educated, they can’t choose a right leader for them. Also today’s children will become the future leaders.
Nations which respect the all-round development of its citizens are the ones which are most prosperous like the two biggest democracies in the world, India and USA. But, on the other hand, if we look at North Korea, its tyrannic leader and its party may seem glamorous and also it’s scientists might be making destructive missiles and nuclear warheads, but its citizens suffer from starvation, malnutrition, lack of proper education, health-care etc. So such an oppressive regime can never succeed in the long-run. History has taught us this lesson several times.
So, to conclude, we can infer that although the achievements of rulers, scientists and intellectual minds are useful, but it is the ultimate well-being of the people of a nation that makes a country truly prosper in all terms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, similarly, so, then, well, as to, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2930.0 2235.4752809 131% => OK
No of words: 567.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16754850088 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86762724604 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500881834215 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 893.7 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2213401302 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8076923077 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165226559508 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454007610202 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575885351388 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985143484298 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590464954876 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 100.480337079 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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