These days a number of people are visiting different countries that were not explored a lot in the past. In recent times, there has been an increase in the number of tourists visiting places which have extreme conditions like the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What could be the reason? In the essay, we shall discuss the pros and cons for tourists who visit such places.
Firstly, one of the main reasons is the trill and adventure you get visiting these places. Due to its extreme conditions, people get to experience the different climate, food and life of the locals on a first hand basis. Secondly, you can also observe some animals and vegetation which only thrive in such weather, thus making them exotic. Moreover, tourism is a blooming industry and all these places are now easily accessible for anybody who wants to visit them from any part of the world.
However, they do have some disadvantages, mainly the health of tourists. Since, many are not used to such harsh conditions it can prove to be fatal to their health, especially for those with medical conditions. In addition, increasing number of tourists will not only lead to an increase in commercialization, but also pose a threat to the environment and nature. Furthermore, the lives of tourists can be at risk if they explore these places without proper guidance and equipment, since these places tend to have sudden change in weather. For instance, there can be several unpredictable incidents like severe snowfall or extreme rains or terrible desert storms, thus leaving the tourists stranded and helpless.
Therefore, if people are visiting such place it is advisable to undertake certain precautionary measures and be fully prepared of what they are getting into. Also, along with enjoyment there should be awareness to about the people and surroundings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 670, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: leaving
...e rains or terrible desert storms, thus leaving leaving the tourists stranded and helpless. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05901639344 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72203032181 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9313725032 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297563200345 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932854245078 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852777957017 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190546018179 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096417634735 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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