Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
• Explain reasons for the noise
• Apologize
• Describe what action you will take
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I have received a letter from your side complaining about the noise coming from my apartment. First of all, I tender my apology for the inconvenience caused. Let me explain the situation.
As you are aware that I have recently purchased this apartment from the previous owner. The apartment needed some major repair work in the washroom and kitchen. To elucidate, the washroom was facing water leakage issues and the kitchen had no ventilation. In fact, the leakage from the water pipe was so bad that it was making the walls damp and thus needed immediate repair.
Therefore I would like to apologize for the inconvenience you and your family had to face as I can understand that noise can be irritating and disturbing when kids are sleeping and studying. Additionally as mentioned in your letter if I had known earlier that your kids were appearing for examination then I would I have postponed the repair work by a few weeks. From tomorrow onwards I would instruct the labour not to carry major repair jobs after 6 pm which will definitely reduce the level of disturbance.
I look forward to your cooperation and look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e caused. Let me explain the situation. As you are aware that I have recently purc...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...mp and thus needed immediate repair. Therefore I would like to apologize for the incon...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ng when kids are sleeping and studying. Additionally as mentioned in your letter if I had kn...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...r if I had known earlier that your kids were appearing for examination then I would I have pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80465116279 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66794362791 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590697674419 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8190718382 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4615384615 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378226537146 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124716228447 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106270530745 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211072230859 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125762220064 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.