The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average daily consumption of electricity in england during both summer and winter. The pie chart gives information about the proportions of four common usages of electricity.
Overall, the demand for electricity during the winter is significantly higher than that in summer, while the highest consumption in both seasons was recorded during the night. Moreover, heating seems to be the major use of electricity in england.
According to the graph, the lowest consumption during the summer as well as the winter was between the hours 6 am and 9 am, it accounted for around 15000 and 30000 units respectively. during the summer, the consumption has reached to approximately 20000 units at 13:30 and at around 23:00. In contrast, during the winter, england's citizens used around double of the amount that was used in the summer. The most popular hour was slightly after 21:00 o'clock when consumption peaked at nearly 50000 units.
With regards to electricity usages, more than half of the total amount (precisely 52%) used it for heating purposes of both room and water. In addition, ovens, kettles and washing machines accounted for 18% of general amount. The rest 30% were divided equally between lighting, TV and radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...und 15000 and 30000 units respectively. during the summer, the consumption has reached...
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Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...t popular hour was slightly after 21:00 oclock when consumption peaked at nearly 50000...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20853080569 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69029052804 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7288654365 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260792231756 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105144683056 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733340419606 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176327899964 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069027280648 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.