The bar charts compare Scotlands tourism, dairy and meat products and the revenue raised from in three separate time spans.
The bar charts compare Scotland's tourism, dairy and meat products and the revenue raised from in three separate time spans.
Overall, as can be seen, the money earned from exporting dairy and tourism increased, however, slightly less cash gained from meat products in 2018 compared with 2000. Furthermore, it is projected that with the exception of international tourism, dairy and meat products will experience a slight fall in 2025.
Regarding international tourism, it is followed by an upward trend throughout the given period and initiated from just above 8 billion ( B) and will reach slightly under 10 B in 2025.
As far as dairy products are concerned, in 2000 they accounted for approximately 7 B which is roughly 3 B lower than in 2018. It is forecasted they will experience a moderate fall in terms of money received from exporting and make up nearly 9.5 B in 2025.
Looking at the meat products graph, it is crystal clear that it has followed a downward pattern starting from 6 B in 2000 and reaching 5.5B in 2018 before making its lowest amount in 2025 with 5B.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...2000. Furthermore, it is projected that with the exception of international tourism, dairy and meat p...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and initiated from just above 8 billion B and will reach slightly under 10 B in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82702702703 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7177741935 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3115061347 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42523203692 0.215688989381 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234406051419 0.103423049105 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.318425098763 0.0843802449381 377% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294341409802 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.359614582127 0.0819641961636 439% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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