Some young people look forward to a year of travelling ,a gap year,before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons.For others this is an expensive waste of time .Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently,the young generation would like to try a gap year before they earn their living or studying in universities. they think it is an opportunity that they can experience various culture and customs.However,some people believe that it is a useless thing and will waste their time.In my opinion,I agree with the former view and this essay will discuss it.
To begin with,it is very beneficial for one's social and personal growth.First,for young people,they do not have time to practice their social skills in the campus.For example,most people will enter the workplace after graduation.they will spend more time to adapt new environment.As a result of this,many young people will choose to escape the problem and change their work again and again. Meanwhile,taking the gap year will improve their career opportunities.gap year travel, which includes new cultural and language knowledge, will make a big difference to future employment prospects.With the development of diversification,employers will pay attention in bilingual and bi-cultural job candidates.
Nevertheless,there are some disadvantages that need to be focused.On the one hand, it will spend much money. For most young students, they do not have working experience . So ,they cannot work and travel at the same time. On the other hand, when people will be travelling , they will face unknown risk. But,dealing with risk is a special experience and contributes their growth.
In conclusion,it is worth to taking the gap year for some young students, which will affect them in the job market future and help them to make more friends.Also,some drawbacks should not be ignored.
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also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4453125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57163339528 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.329960029 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.4 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290262011618 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118841539997 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554241420145 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181581461866 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573315716253 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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