You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
1) explain why you have moved.
2) describe the new house.
3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Mark,
How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this epistle to inform of my relocation to a new house. Let me further explain.
To elucidate there were many reasons for the relocation the most preponderant ones were a need for a bigger house as my parents were planning to move in and travel time to my office. The new house is a duplex building and is located in the plush society at the outskirts of the city just a few minutes drive from my office. Additionally, it has all the enticing amenities which includes a gymnasium room along with a beautiful garden in the front and a swimming pool for the kids in the backyard. Despite the fact that it is located in the suburbs of the city round the clock security is provided to the residents.
Since I have moved last week I am inviting all my college friends for a house warming party. Why don't you come and pay us a visit? I can assure you that you will have a lot of fun.
I look forward to your response.
Cheers
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Mark, How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met....
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Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... friends for a house warming party. Why dont you come and pay us a visit? I can assu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24102564103 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38593291422 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1846069593 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9166666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24197306329 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799244842047 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787631455851 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153952931602 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111368376175 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.