You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Mark,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter in reference to inform you that I have moved to a new house.
To elucidate the main reasons of relocation were limited space availability in my existing apartment and lack of major amenities like a gymnasium and a swimming pool moreover it used to take a lot of travel time from my office which used to affect my leisure activities. The new condominium is a three two bedroom apartment located at the outskirts of the city much closer to my office. It provides all the modern comforts like a gym, swimming pool, sauna and 24 hours security. Additionally, due to its superb location, you can see the see the panoramic view of the lake from the alfresco part of the apartment.
Why don’t you come over this weekend? Since I have moved in last week I am inviting all my college friends. I believe it will a great opportunity to meet our old friends and have some fun.
I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, How have you been? It has been a long ti...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
... new condominium is a three two bedroom apartment located at the outskirts of the city mu...
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Line 4, column 530, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'see the'.
Suggestion: see the
...ly, due to its superb location, you can see the see the panoramic view of the lake from the alf...
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Line 6, column 44, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... don't you come over this weekend? Since I have moved in last week I am inviting...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to your response. Yours sincerely Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51595744681 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59889828488 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4380538287 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.75 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267421427101 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098151416831 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974065340487 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162450416187 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106920607699 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.