You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
• Describe the item
• Explain where and when you left it
• Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to recover an item which I lost recently while on transit. it was Sunday evening last week when I boarded the Superfast mail from Beijing railway station to Lhasa. I was seated at coach Number A on seat no 45.
The item which I lost is my travel bag which is black in colour with the stamp of different countries to which I travelled in the past apart from this it has my credit card, driving license and some cash. Since it is an overnight journey to Lhasa I had kept the bag under my seat where I was sleeping but in the morning when I woke up I couldn't find it.I tried asking my fellow passengers and but they too didn't have any clue about the whereabouts of my bag. The bag was a gift from my girlfriend and it reminds me of the adventurous travels I did in the past.
I would like to let you know that I am in a perplexing situation as I am in this foreign city without cash and credit card hence I request you to find my bag. If you manage to locate it, please ring me immediately on 56784894 I shall come and collect it.
I look forward to your immediate help.
Yours sincerely
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...which I lost recently while on transit. it was Sunday evening last week when I boa...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...seated at coach Number A on seat no 45. The item which I lost is my travel bag w...
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Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
... which I lost is my travel bag which is black in colour with the stamp of different countries t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ing but in the morning when I woke up I couldnt find it.I tried asking my fellow passen...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...orning when I woke up I couldnt find it.I tried asking my fellow passengers and b...
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Line 4, column 407, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...g my fellow passengers and but they too didnt have any clue about the whereabouts of ...
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Line 4, column 562, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... adventurous travels I did in the past. I would like to let you know that I am i...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your immediate help. Yours sincerely Mark
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...immediate help. Yours sincerely Mark
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, while, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17488789238 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31720138717 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.006856807 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165731854487 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595454481813 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484777232786 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916564809318 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474914604028 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.