Dear Sir or Madam;
I am writing this letter to inform you about the valuable item that I lost last week on the train when I came back home from work. I was on the train No A3028 from the central station to Sanat Square at 9:00 pm.
I had my backpack and it was my MacBook Pro and very important documents from my work research on the bag. It was black leather with a golden handle and on the back of my bag tagged a logo from my workplace.
You know that time of night is the crowded one and I gave my seat to an old lady and put my stuff beside myself on the train ground. However, I was very careful with my belonging, but for a second I stuck the middle of people when the train stopped at the station and I pushed out of the cabin so I left my bag on a train.
I would be grateful if you check the lost objects' room or looking at security footage on the train wagons in order to find my object if somebody stole it.
I am looking forward to answering my request.
Yours sincerely
Sogol Hassani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... answering my request. Yours sincerely Sogol Hassani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.01990049751 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10103454982 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1505623343 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151600522343 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633694059325 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685882285956 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831346025824 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735317982287 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.33 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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