*Some Governments say how many children a family can have in their country should be strictly controlled. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. Is It sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way?*
Some government say that taxes could be used to control the number of children a family can have.I believe it is not proper for the government to use this means as a way of controlling the population of a country.This will be explained in details in my essay discussion.
Firstly,there are so many ways government can reduce the population of a country.This could be done through the use of family planning.The government through health education enlightened their citizens to see the need to do family planning. Since there are various types that can be used and it will not predispose the parents to any health hazard. By doing this,it will help in spacing their children and also they will see the reason why they should not have more than certain number of children thus this will help the government to plan for the citizens.
Also, other means by which population could be controlled apart from the use of taxes is , that the government gives certain benefits to any family that have fewer children either by given them for instance scholarship or reduction in the school fee, in doing this other parents in the society will want to enjoy this and this will give them the opportunity to see the reason why they should have fewer children since they can see what those that have small number of children are enjoying.
In conclusion, government can encourage parents to use family planning method in reducing number of children or through the use of certain benefits to encourage those that have small number of children than the use of taxes in controlling the country population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87867647059 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65426512896 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433823529412 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.006400788 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.166666667 106.682146367 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.3333333333 20.7667163134 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400991836115 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222726918294 0.084324248473 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934656761831 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287435078593 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478195771656 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.0946893788 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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