Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distance but they also cause problems.what are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there.
Road as a means of transportation has really assist human being to move from one place to another, although,there are problem associate with it. The problems and their solutions will be explained in this essay.
There are adverse effect that follows the use of road when travelling.One of them is that, there are lots of Vehicles on the road. This is because everybody want to drive their own personal cars and do not want to board commercial.Another point is the environmental health issues it brings to the society.
The above mentioned problems have some negative impact too. The foremost effect is that , there is always heavy traffic on the road hence , it affect the rate at which the road will be spoiling resulting from pot holes.In addition,the exhaust released from the fuel generated by the cars also cause air pollution. For example, making breathing difficult for people with respiratory illnesses such as asthmatic patients.
However, there are some suggestions for providing solutions to it. One of them is ,government should provide other alternative means of travelling such as provision of train in the community and ensuring that the fare is affordable. Furthermore, other means of fueling vehicles should be looked into like using hydrowater and solar energy.As this will greatly be beneficial and help in curbing problems associate with it .
Thus, to conclude the topic, it can be finally commented that traffic congestion and contamination of the air has negative impact on the road ply by commuters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, really, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23886639676 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95729606228 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599190283401 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3883392999 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.636363636 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.073134249374 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300015874346 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235291674566 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368142197064 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300765457204 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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