Individuals knows the significant of the environment to them and some of their activities are responsible for damaging this natural gift given to mankind.There are so many reasons responsible for this and also individuals need to be motivated so see the need to preserve nature.This will be explained in details in my essay discussion.
Due to increment in human population, individuals triav to make life better by ensuring that the provision of food,clothes and shelter and these are predominately seen by cutting down the trees for cultivation of crops and for building houses.in addition, if cautious is not taking it can cause erosion and flooding in the area.
Again, reason for which some of human activities are destroying the environment is, people want to live a sedentary lifestyle, they do not want to be stressed.Instead, of people using commercial vehicles everybody will want to drive their cars.The fumes coming from this vehicles causes air pollution,predisposing people to respiratory diseases such as asthma. Furthermore, the blowing of horns from the cars also causes noise pollution and if it's beyond what human can endure it can cause partial deafness.
Nevertheless, the are measures government can put into practice to encourage and motivate human beings to protect their environment. The government need to create awareness among individuals that if trees are cut down they need to be planted by given them free plant for planting. Not only that , government should educate the community people on the importance of engaging in physical activities if the can trek some few distance before boarding vehicles.
Finally, mankind activities needs to be checked so that the environment can be safe and some of the reasons for distorting its like cutting down trees and sedentary lives should be directed by government by encouraging people to plant trees and to engage in physical exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27540983607 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14389445836 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5552317649 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.125 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.125 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318893061927 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123150497237 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645715514363 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16603495865 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554687779964 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.0946893788 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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