The bar chart illustrates the worldwide turnover of four digigal games (Mobile phone games, online games, console game and handheld games) from 2000 to 2006.
Overall, it can be seen that handheld games was the most popular game in the world. During 7 years period, there was an obvious upward trend of mobile phone games, online games and handheld games.
The sales of handheld games increased gradually during this period (from nearly 12 billions of dollars in 2002 to nearly 18 billions of dollars in 2006). However, console games sales dropped in the same period (from under 6 billions of dollars to about 3 billions of dollars).
Human started to play online games in 2001 and mobile phone games in 2002. The number of users jumped dramatically after 5 years. It was around 1 billions of dollars in 2002 and more than 6 billions of dollars in 2006.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '12 billion'.
Suggestion: 12 billion
...radually during this period from nearly 12 billions of dollars in 2002 to nearly 18 billions o...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '18 billion'.
Suggestion: 18 billion
...2 billions of dollars in 2002 to nearly 18 billions of dollars in 2006. However, console games...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 billion'.
Suggestion: 6 billion
...s dropped in the same period from under 6 billions of dollars to about 3 billions of dollars....
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 billion'.
Suggestion: 3 billion
...om under 6 billions of dollars to about 3 billions of dollars. Human started to play online ...
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Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '1 billion'.
Suggestion: 1 billion
...amatically after 5 years. It was around 1 billions of dollars in 2002 and more than 6 billion...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 billion'.
Suggestion: 6 billion
...llions of dollars in 2002 and more than 6 billions of dollars in 2006.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25188623152 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9556236138 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300433196098 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137744499393 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908047429078 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18990280713 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733995493816 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.