The graph illustrates the percentage of difficulties which was experienced by people of various groups age.
In general, the percentage of forming friendships problem is greatest in people’s age from 18 to 34, while people aged 35 – 54 has a problem in looking for accommodation. In addition, the proportion of studying the local language difficulty of older people was highest.
The percentage of problems about making friends, finding to apartments and language-learning was approximately 45 percent, 39 percent and 38 percent, respectively in people aged 18 – 34. Meanwhile, for people aged 35 – 54, the proportion of both forming friendship and studying a language to speaking the local inhabitant difficulties were the same, it stood at over 45 percent, but the greatest problem was finding somewhere to live, it was roughly 40 percent.
For older people aged over 55, the problems about making friends and looking for accommodation was just over 21 percent, while the language-learning problem as much as two times than the others, it was about 53 percent.
- the tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts? 56
- The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services 67
- Scientific Research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries China and India Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data 84
- The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an the others, it was about 53 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30813953488 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27619761233 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6786024485 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.166666667 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132829946374 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791149720498 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297983151333 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925942876258 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305627219281 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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