It is an unwelcome truth that family members no longer having a mealtime together. There are several reasons for this trend and it brings about some effect on their living daily.
In particular, there are many reasons why family meal is disappearing, however, two main reasons for this. Firstly, it is considerable pressure on economic competitions and put employee in a tight budget of their mealtime. Therefore, it is really difficult in preparing a family meal when people are gruelling work. Indeed, in a developed world, companies require a huge amount of work on their employee, hence people greatly desire to have lunch or dinner out. Secondly, due to striking development in the fast food industry provides easier access to save their eating time. For example, Grab and GoViet are two software applications to help people order food effectively. Specifically, people have waited only approximately 20 minutes for selection and expect meal will be brought to where you book. It is a convenient way in more saving mealtime than preparing family meal daily.
On the other hand, this trend suggests many substantial impacts on human livings. The first effect that people have directly experienced through activities everyday. That is family members are no longer as close as before, they rarely share their stories together due to each person is constantly busy with personal activities. Another important thing is fast food undermines people’s health since it always largely consist of oil and harmful substance. Therefore, people have been eating fast food in a long time that causes suffering for people such as obesity and cardiovascular problems.
In conclusion, while people spend less time to have family meals together become more and more rarely, that has been considerable impact on living everyday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...directly experienced through activities everyday. That is family members are no longer a...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... has been considerable impact on living everyday.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76809579677 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5541898766 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160797465816 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540024896103 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592235021087 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102137073867 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381365341646 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.