In some country, children are expected to study more time both in and after school. Advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Nowaday, in some countries, children grade and studying are highly appreciated. Parents want children learn hardly. They think studying in school is not enough, children should learn after school. It has both benefit and disadvantages.
Fistly, it is have some advantages. Studying hardly helps kids can get high score at school. It is not only make parent very pround of them but also they can have a good degree which important with them in the future when they want to find a job easily. Children will improve their knowledge, booklore and become erudite in many aspect. They can know more clearly about science, literature, physic, maths. And if they learn language well they can talk to people all around the word without any language barrier. That is big advange in life today.
Beside advantages it has many disadvantages. Studying in school and after school are too much. It is bad to children health. Chilren will be stress and always feel tired, they don’t want to eat anything. They do not have time to relax and become exhausted so they cant concentrate on their study. They don’t play sport or do some activities. With that all cause they are easy to get sick. High score is matter if you don’t have well health? Stress also leads children to negative and terrible thoughts. Specially, communication is a important skill of human, when kids learn all time, they cant contact or go out with anybody. Therefore, their communication wont improve. They will become unconfident, don’t want to talk and cant remain their relationship like friend, family, or love.
After all, every problem will have two sides. So if childen learn enough and have time to relax and join social activities, they will be grown up better than they study all time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95986622074 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5343006601 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4772156648 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.32 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.96 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.8 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179466420157 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622027452768 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693190996336 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140594482868 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858357675758 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.6 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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