The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
The chart provides information regarding a comparison in percentage of overseas graduate students from universities that base on regions in Canada between 2001 and 2006.
Overall, the percentage of international students who graduated in different Canadian provinces in 2006 was considerably higher than those in 2001 although only the percentages in Alberta showed the reverse.
According to the graph, in 2001 there were just about 3-7 percent graduate pupils from abroad per each region in Canada. However, the next five years, the percentage of the overseas pupils were about 3-8 percent high...
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