Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
When we turn back the annals of history, we can find that art has always been given the least priority, barring a few periods, where the governing bodies, prioritized art and its various forms. This dates back even to the medieval ages, where artisans and their works were viewed as a pastime and were primarily a fancy of the upper strata of the society.
This trend of decreased attention towards art forms can be primarily attributed to a view and to an extent, a fact that art and its forms are more financially consuming, unlike its peers like science, technology and business which are financial contributors. This is because, art is still considered as a hobby or a pastime and not as a channel of intellectual development or as a essential part of our lives unlike the other aforementioned streams. Science, technology and business continue to thrive even today, because, they are not only viewed primarily as an essential part of our lives, which needs continuous attention and effort, but also are actually breadwinning avenues. Art on the other hand, is not viewed as a lucrative avenue for jobs and is more dependent on the good will of people.
However, if we time travel through human life existence, art has existed, or can even say, thrived, despite being neglected. It has actually preserved our identity and our roots. To preserve such an artefact, art and its various forms should be initially imbibed into our academic curriculum and various successful artisan’s works and their case studies must be made a subject of study in the initial stages itself. Also, society as well, should be encouraged and made aware, that art is woven into civilization’s fabric and should be preserved. Actually, the governments across the world are convening over this and are even setting up cabinets and ministers for the promotion of art. This should actually incentivise people to take more interest in arts.
Art has been in co-existence with human life, from its start, with traces of cave paintings having been discovered. Over the period of years, it has lost its sheen, due to the society, becoming more focussed towards avenues, which generate a source of income. An improved trend of appreciating art is just around the corner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iness which are financial contributors. This is because, art is still considered as ...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...annel of intellectual development or as a essential part of our lives unlike the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, still, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98408488064 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80179939629 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543766578249 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.469631165 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.266666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219354657817 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726390508487 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387403831136 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121626728546 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433953394355 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.