Some people think that good health is a basic human need so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies.
Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
People claim that having good health is a strong foundation to perfect their life so that health care services should not be provided by private companies. I believe that this has more advantages for the process of treatment and the expansion of medical to the remote areas than disadvantages such as the high costs paid for private health care.
The privately run health care institutions improve significantly the medical procedure more quickly. They provide faster services that are suitable for a long waiting list of patients to reduce time-consuming. Nowadays, a growing number of people have a regular check-up to get a suitable treatment instead of waiting for a long time when using public hospitals.
Furthermore, private health services reduce the numerous sick people from remote areas due to a shortage of health care. If more of these agencies were established in less accessible regions, minority groups, especially, could receive more primary health care than previous. To illustrate, many surveys show that the living standards of isolated areas are improved because of the development of health care services.
Despite these, the negative impact on the payment of private health care services limits those whose modest or low incomes cannot afford the costs for treatment. Moreover, patients have to pay a large amount for prescription charges and high-tech machines used in treatment when governments do not introduce restrictions on costs for such private services. For example, many research demonstrates that 30% of death are due to they can not pay for the pricey of private health care every year.
In conclusion, despite the drawback of expensive costs, the treatment services and the establishment of private hospitals in remote areas better people’s lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...for such private services. For example, many research demonstrates that 30% of death are due ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41637010676 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84105701624 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565836298932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7642606 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143796752973 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648949380896 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637575504488 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914248630786 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591449903689 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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