The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph illustrates the quantity of queries received by the Tourist information Office in a city for half a year in 2011.
A glance at the diagram clearly reveals that, the enquiries made by people in the form of letter and email drasitically dropped compared to in person and telephone requests. Firstly, both in person and telephone requests are increased and reached its peak in a very short period of time. However letter/email started with high but reached its lowest by the end of june.
Regarding in person requests, it started with 430, slowly surged and reached maximum in june by touching 1900. In other words, there was a sudden jump in the requests between March and April compared to others. Similarly, Telephone requests are fluctuated in the begining and gradual raise in it and overall good amount of in june.
In Conclusion, the requests done via letter/email got dip as it is indirectly proportional to the other two ways of communication.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that, environment plays imperative role for the ecological system in the world. Due to the over popuplation and utilization of more resources causes huge damage on it. Eventhough government and large firms make a big difference , individuals also should be responsible for the
enhancement of the environment. It is a hotly debated topic which calculate the human's role for the same. I totally disagree with the point that individuals make nothing to the environment.
Firsly, A small act can cause an huge impact on a big problem. Particularly, on the environment. Humans are playing vital role in demolishing the environment. In other words, each and every individual has their own contribution destructive of environment. For instance, In 2014, there was a massive act was done by the people who lived in new york, they understood condition of very popular river in the area, So they decided to renovate it completely without the help of government.
In addition to that, Government could impose strict rules on the civilians to follow the rules to save the environment. And also big industries could reconstruct and make compaign to save the environment. For example, government of india has introduced the ban in plastic. But after few days it has no effect. Because of the population, government could not control each and everyone's usage of plastic which makes environment pollution. It clearly reveals that, the governement can only make the rules to restrict but following it is very essential.
In Conclusion, Despite the fact that government and companies play tremendous role in saving the environment, each idividual can help to make it happen efficiently.
- Every recent inventions are useful for own purpuse and for the society there are some inventions in disfunctioning and some are inpositive way but we find many inventions in positive helping and guiding people and society which makes people comfortable 56
- Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museums, town halls and sporting facilities is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Some People believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and g 67
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 73
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are youngsters role model. Do you support it or not? 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 33.7804878049 225% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 32.0 3.97073170732 806% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2486.0 965.302439024 258% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 483.0 196.424390244 246% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14699792961 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 3.73543355544 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00546482204 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 106.607317073 233% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513457556936 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.0 283.868780488 276% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 8.94146341463 313% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1301887739 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7857142857 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82142857143 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 40.7170731707 302% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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