some people think health care should be free for everyone, while other think they should pay medical costs for themselves. Discuss both view
Whether government should set a free health care system for their citizens or not has sparks a heated debate in our modern society. while many people believe the medical cost should be paid within their budgets, I am of the opinion that free medical system has more significant merits.
On the one hand, there are number of reasons as why many people believe health care services should be charged. First of all, with the payment of patients,hospitals could enhance their pocket to upgrade service standard. To be more specific, medical fees might be spent on training doctors,nurses and hospital staffs in attempt to boost examination quality and quantity. Moreover, their medical materials and equipment could be updated to latest versions with the aim of assuring exact medical results. Second, money from health care system might reduce the financial burden on government. For example, in numerous developing countries, if national and local authorities prioritize on paying total expenses of healthcare system, they might lack of funding on other industries which leads to constraints on economic growth.
On the other hand, it is argued that healthcare system should be freely available to everyone. One convincing explanation for that is the life span of citizen will increase due to the aid of free health care. In fact, each individual would be encouraged to take the regular check-up which prevents the development of fatal diseases. Besides, it is citizens's right to have a valuable care from government. Indeed, one of the government’s responsibilities is to guarantee the adequate and high-standard medical services for its citizens. For instance, in a number of developed countries, the legislation of hospital fee’s elimination was imposed for the sake of their inhabitants.
In conclusion, although there are several reasons to advocate the idea of costing medical services, I firmly believe that free healthcare is far more beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Suggestion: , nurses
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...aterials and equipment could be updated to latest versions with the aim of assuring exact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38961038961 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01687501047 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9371839148 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325515227335 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102465776421 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643339892205 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195512771762 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769105348265 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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