Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat balanced diet.
What are the reasons behind this?
Suggest possible solutions to control this.
Unbalanced diet and unhealthy eating patterns are very common with people these days. Some of the reasons for the worrying trend are availability of cheap junk food and the modern busy lifestyles. This essay will elaborate on the causes of the phenomenon and suggest possible solutions.
To begin with, a major reason for this menace is the easy access to lowly priced junk and over the counter meals. It is common these days to have several fast food outlets offering ridiculously priced meal which in turn increases patronage and consumption by people. For example, in Nigeria there are at least three food outlets offering discounted meal combos on each major road. In addition, the lifestyle of the 21st century man encourages poor feeding habits. In other words, most people are always on the move commuting to and from work, leaving them with little time or no time to cook healthy meals thereby resorting to quick snacks or food. These reasons have contributed greatly to poor eating habits and absence of balanced meals.
There are several ways to curb this issue. One of which is increasing taxes on junk food. By doing this fast food become expensive and unaffordable for most people and this reduces its consumers. Another way is to create awareness on healthy eating. In other words the various food control agencies can run radio and television adverts encouraging people to eat well. Also, they can organize visit to public places like the hospital, stadia and the church to educate people on the benefits of eating nutritious meals.
To sum up, making over the counter meals less affordable by raising its tax rates and educating people on balanced diets will help solve the problem identified in this essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, at least, for example, in addition, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97577854671 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40847352547 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0334752824 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287655585496 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871945477948 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077250452974 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168509124287 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035825550975 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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