More and more people are relying on private cars as their means of transportation. Describe some problems over reliance can cause and suggest possible solutions
Nowadays, a lot of people are depending on private cars as their mode of commuting. This development can lead to some issues such as traffic congestion and air pollution. This essay will elaborate on these problems and proffer solutions .
To begin with, the increase in cars owned by people can result in traffic gridlock. This is because the number of vehicles on the road contribute to road jams in most cities, as a result of several commuters plying same routes to work and school. In Lagos for example, there were less than ten thousand private cars in the 80’s with little or no traffic, however, this situation changed drastically as more people became car owners. Another point of note is the attendant pollution of the atmosphere. In other words, cars emit toxic fumes which becomes noticeable when there are many automobiles concentrated in an area. For instance, in Beijing China air pollution is a serious epidemic plaguing the city and experts have attributed it to carbon emissions from cars.
Admittedly, there are several solutions to the problems highlighted above , two of which are provision of state of the art public transportation and subsidizing electric cars. Firstly, government should make available modern buses and trains to attracts more passengers thereby reducing the number of car users . Also , the use of electric vehicles ought to be supported owing to the fact that they have no emissions unlike the traditional motor car. The technology being a new one is somewhat expensive and unaffordable by many. The government should cut the cost price by paying the manufacturers grants leading to a reduction in selling prices.
To sum up, investing in new public transport vehicles and reducing prices of electric cars by policy makers are possible ways to curb the problems associated with over dependency on private cars
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14851485149 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78925901185 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0464348763 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223841980641 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637628083475 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602157889518 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136755308035 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040527751729 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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